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Today, I...

Today I stepped into the garden.
Hedges were trimmed,
Grass was long.

It was boring.
And,
Green.

Today I killed a man.
Head was cut,
Hair was long.

It was beautiful.
And,
Red.

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Written October 21st, 2006

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  • BehindTheSorrow
    February 17, 2007
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    this is like modified haiku style
    i don't want you to kill anyone
    we watched this weird movie in american government and these kids stabbed this other kid with spears and then they dropped a boulder on another kid. ANARCHY!