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Eternal Now: for Night Hope

These meager expressions respond

To ghostly originalities of your poetic Heart~

To emulate your Beauty is to perish
Before reaching success.

Jealousy a pathetic retort,

Success in happy surrender lies.

Memories are embers

Of fragile fires

Replaced with Eternal Now.

I look in your eyes to see New Horizons,

Touch your pale skin for warmth,

Read your words to haunt my Soul~

You say, "You honor me, Poet."

I say, "I love you, Darling."




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Written October 21st, 2006

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  • white stone
    October 23, 2006
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    I see Don Juan making his entrance to the cantina with style. But not Don Juan, mjjuan, Moon Hero Juan. You are a romantic with the mystique and suave of an international spy. Tickling the heart of your love with delicate strings of heavy words, surely knocking her out with each verbal blow. 1,2...1,2...1,2,3! Your combos are making even ME waver a bit, and I just catch the wind off em'!! Honey in the comb of my mind, this is.


  • paullallady silver member
    October 22, 2006
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    very good

    What a wonderful piece of poetry. The wording, the flow, all of it is wonderful. I am a fan of your poetry and you already knew that. Thank you for entering this contest, though I would have read this anyways. Thank you again.


  • masterblaster gold member
    October 22, 2006
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    Hi, the words no greater love have I came to mind when reading this, to love like this is so special and I wish you both all the happiness in the word, you have my applause, hugs Di


  • SpiritMother
    October 22, 2006
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    Beautiful and Loving

    Your words written so true for someone who I love dearly as well. Wanda is the hope that has helped me through many hard times and without her the world would stop turning for many. Beautifully well written.


  • pixxiepoetess
    October 22, 2006
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    This is such a touching tribute. I don't think there's anything to critique. Good luck in the contest! --->pixxie<---


  • kaibab silver member
    October 22, 2006
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    I was wondering if you have ever read Paul Tillich...as this concept flow through his writing...I am certain Wanda glows and glows...


  • hoodoolover silver member
    October 21, 2006
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    Beautiful words for a beautiful poetess, great job, I see nothing to haggle about here, perfection


  • daeste
    October 21, 2006
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    Nice, very romantic and moving.


  • soulfultia gold member
    October 21, 2006
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    wonderful

    and the melody continued to play of a harmonious union.... ~Tia


  • Mary O gold member
    October 21, 2006
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    Such a lovely tribute to one who's inspired you. And I read she's very pleased. Good luck to you in the contest.
    ~Mary O

  • avendesora
    October 21, 2006
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    awww. this is so sweet. i love it. i also really like the last two lines of the poem. great job and thanks for sharing.


  • Twinstar
    October 21, 2006
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    Beautiful piece, very lovely poem for a very lovely lady!!!
    love & Light
    Twinstar


  • lovelifelive gold member
    October 21, 2006
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    lovely piece


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    October 21, 2006
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    Excellant / fun/romantic

    A wonderful write and tremendous tribute to Night Hope, who deserves it.

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