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My first time

Your body is so ammusing
I just want it more each day
Your touch your kiss your passion
It just blows my mind away

I want you more with every minute
More just more i say
Give it to me rough
Give it to me easy
You know what i want so please me

Be gentle now
I'm still the same girl
But show me yourself
Dont make this easy

Oh god you make me lose control
I want you just to never let go
So take your time
And keep on going
We got plenty of time
So lets do this slowly

Your doing great
I can feel you now
Your so far up and in me
So now come on out
And turn around
I'll show you what i got in me

Now give me some slack
I've never done this before
But for you my love
I'll show you more

This might hurt
But i hear it feels good
Now get ready dont frown
As i slowly move down

Brace yourself now here i go
(suck, lick, kiss)
Thats it no more
I love you tons
This night was the best
The night we both got to have sex

Author notes

I let my friend put her poem up here and well its a little...dirty
forgive her
Written October 21st, 2006

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  • Tithe
    October 21, 2006
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    *whistles loudly* I really like this poem and I think that I might show it to my girlfriend... It really describes our experiance... With credit given of course. ^-^


  • suup jordan
    October 21, 2006
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    way to go! i enjoyed the point of view that you shared

  • babygurl1014
    October 21, 2006
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    WOW thats interesting. check mine out sometime. love keisha