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†Iced Heart†


 


This heart is cold and dead

No warmth resides here

All love has faded away

All light has diminished


 

Winter has gone, but still I'm cold

Lips are turning blue

Eyes are slowly closing

The darkness is carrying me away


 

Where do you run when there's nothing left?

Who do you turn to when nobody is there?

Who do you love when you yourself are not loved?

What do you have left to cherish and have hope in?


 

~ ~


 

Somewhere, there is someone meant for me

There is a flame hidden beneath this iced heart

Someone is awaiting their chance to heal me

Most importantly, someone to truly love me and care


 

There is still a sparkle behind these eyes

Silently this heart still beats with hope,

Knowing there is love, gives me strength

Strength to move forward, not backwards


 

My past will fade to dust

The dark memories will disintegrate

For once in my life, I will be happy

Never again will I have to fake a smile


 

~ ~


 

After treading on many darkened paths

Life steered me in the right direction

The direction to you and your heart

In which you willingly accepted me


 

I always thought love was just a facade

But in reality, it just takes that one person,

That one person to change your life around

To show you the true concept of love


 

True love can conquer all

Just have to believe

My iced heart has melted

And it's all because of you..


 

~ ~


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  • I like that you chose to enter this poem. It shows my prompt in the form of love. Love can be our worst curse as well as our greatest gift. We travel the road of love and it is filled with pain, fear, sorrow, and loss. But it is also filled with hope, joy, peace and contentment. With out the pain of first loves we can never truly know the joy of true love. Good luck in the contest.


  • Three Doves
    February 8, 2008

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    wonderful job and congrats on the well deserved gold and may I say to you "Be healed in the name of Jesus"
    for he is "that one person to change your life around to show you the true concept of love". may all you do be in the glory of God.

  • allena1966
    January 24, 2008

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    It would be easier to read and read more smoothly if you would put punctuation at the end of your thoughts rather than doing a free fall but I like this.


  • Forlorn Dreams
    July 20, 2007

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    ive never seen love wrote about this way, it was heart warming and very lovely. it had a nice flow to it. i really enjoyed this poem. great work! thanks for entering and good luck!
    Kelcey


  • MysticAngelEyes
    March 25, 2007
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    Im so glad you've found the love of you rlife and things are better, written very nicely


  • Rock-Junkie
    November 18, 2006
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    this is actually something I was looking for! great job and I wish you all the luck in my contest. I like this a lot...


  • silencethequestion
    November 11, 2006
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    wow this is very very well written. thanks for entering my contest and good luck. you are a very talented writter

  • Royal Ernest
    October 26, 2006
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    Solid

    The coldness of a freeze is beaten handily by the thaw. Good poem.


  • Dead Star--x
    October 26, 2006
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    ♥ This is so cute! Im happy for you! Im glad you found someone to make you happy and melt your ice heart! Its amazing what love can do huh, it can change you for better and for worse!
    ♥ ♥ ♥
    Abused


  • capricornpoet
    October 23, 2006
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    love is all

    love is a secret that we don't know , but when it's there we feel it glow... lovely poem of devotion .


  • xSallyxDollx
    October 22, 2006
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    Awww wish I could find someone like that... oh well....
    you did great on this piece sweetie I loved every worrd and tender morsel of it. I missed you work!!

    ♥ Jordanne ♥


  • Never Fall in Love
    October 21, 2006
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    Love can turn and twist anything
    some for the better and another for worst
    im glad you got someone to show u better
    and also that u realize that life is not all that bad
    u have an extremely well written poem here
    written really emotionally
    excellent job
    keep it up!
    ~NeVeR~

  • MxA
    October 21, 2006
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    Honestly babygirl not a day goes by in which you don't amaze me. I love you so much, and the message, in this carries so much truth, so much brightness. Light is all you have delivered me my love, and I too once had an iced heart, I've never known love or emotions before, till the day I met you....smile This makes me smile, and as always cry, my tears are of the purest bliss my angel. You are that star in the sky that guides me and protects me. My dream come true, our love burns so strong, you are the right that will never go wrong, I'm so madly in love with you. You're all that matters to me, the only one I dedicate my every ounce of emotion to. I was so lost, so cold, then you came along, embracing me with your warmth and faithfulness, I can not ever thank you enough. Since the day we've crossed paths I believed in you, and always will, everything about you I adore, you are so talented, inspirational, and precious. Most importantly you freely accepted me, and I you it's so amazing babygirl cause that's what you are perfection. I love you so very much, thanks for this lovely poem.


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 21, 2006
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    Awwww... You are amazing dearest, and I'm glad that you have someone like Michele in your life ... Very inspirational piece my dear ... Me loves you!


  • Twilight Moon
    October 21, 2006
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    this was really emotional and amazing


  • LyricistFor TheMute
    October 21, 2006
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    So many of my writes carry this very meaning. i want my love to last. this write reminds me of how i need to stay strong. my love with angel eyes isnt over for sure, if i can keep her heart focused on me then it wont run astray. this piece inspires that motive. thank you so much.

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