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The Hamlet Coo

His heart flew near her and began to woo,
Oh the sylph stopped there to listen his coo,
He played some tricks to get her boon,
With coy she waddled away soon,
What a love, Even the kine beside moo.

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Written October 21st, 2006

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  • rejitha
    April 16, 2008
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    Mmmmmmmmmm

    So You are a little bit naughty
    Mmmm do you love anyone
    You know what I meant Big Boy


  • rhondasail
    January 10, 2007
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    Enjoyable read, fun. I was surprised how easily the imagery you used gave me an immediate picture of "stolen kisses" hidden from the worlds eyes. You have an interesting style here, and the rhyme is unusual to my eye, but well done and yes, a bit naughty.