How could you do this to me?
Didn't you know I love you?
Now I'm all alone, you're gone
You left me to pick up
Gather up the pieces of my life
As I slowly gather the shards
My heart begins to heal
None of the pieces have you
The pieces don't show you
Suddenly I have to stop
Halting,
Your death has made me realize
Realize, I never loved you
My heart was not broken
Those shards never existed
Just my mind playing tricks
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Written October 21st, 2006
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A great poem. It defines things that go through a lot of our lives. Great job, and keep writing!
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Excellent piece! And what a significant realization! I love the word halting so that earned you applause haha! Great piece, you put a unique spin on something cliche. Keep penning !
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damned mindtricks!
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hungjury
its good to take fucked up things and make poetry about them. its a kind of therapy, i think. good job.
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this was really good i liked it alot
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