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New Life

The storm moves through the moutains
The valley is exposed
For all of Nature's tensions
Shall be briefly sowed

With all of Heaven's fountains
Surely, there is room
The storm has ended in the valley
And now a flower blooms

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Written October 20th, 2006

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    October 21, 2006
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    Hi John. Very nice write. Good imagery, flow and rhyme. Nice tone. Good rhythm. Encouraging. A much enjoyed read. Shelley


  • Broken Machine
    October 21, 2006
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    nice poem! I like it a lot!