Dear Stranger,
Words cannot express the agony that seem to raid my heart.The power of agony can be felt only by who actually bear it. I feel like I am no one. I feel I am an individual with a name as lovely as the fresh dew droplets but as empty and hollow as the skies. The world has piled in a warmth for me that no more feels warm..it is now burning the basis of my existence threatening me to stop breathing.
But wouldn't stopping of breath means I wont have you anymore beside me .On the contrary I wont feel anything because there will be no more left of me. You will not remember me as your love but as a coward who killed herself because she couldn't bare to face the world with smiles when her heart was breaking into pieces. I have always loved you and will always. Love is eternal but the mortals who feel and share love are not which is indeed sad but truly as I right this letter to you I feel more and more confident of my ending. It didn't have to be so severe. It could have been simple. I could have died when I was 40 years in the warmth of my bed but I am the one who is creating the situation for myself..surely you are not to blame this time. Well, you were never to blame for anything. It had always been my mistake love and hence I am punishing myself for that.
I only hope you could also forgive me since I have not been able to do that. By the time you read this I will be dead but I promise to watch you from above and be a better angel than a human.
If you ever get time love , please do remember me.
Love you
phoenix
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option no 1
Written October 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- ♥ Letters ♥ by Atrophya.
600 points, ended August 28, 2007, 34 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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In my opinion, it was a very strong write. Personal, sad and amazingly written. Great!
Keep writing
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This was deeply beautiful, truly inspiring and heartfelt. Thank you for this. This is so sad.
GL in the contest.
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deep
This is a very sad and heartgripping poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and the best of luck to you in the contest
Kari -
A very well written suicide letter, i like how you wrote that you would be a better angel than human, that line really grabbed me.. Goodluck
Lostsoul7 -
Very nicely done Good luck in the contest
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Such a sad write you have penned. Good luck in the contest
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Good Luck
Well done my darling niece. This is so touching. Again the words you have used are brilliant. Good luck to you in this contest.
Keep writing
Love Your Ap Aunt
Countrybabe 
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