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Line in the Sand



drawn the line in the sand
will find out where I stand now
it's the spirit's show





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Use your wings, little birdie! Use your wings!
Written October 20th, 2006

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  • cheaphotelsign
    May 23, 2007

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    oooh. challenge! bring it on!! such a strong presentation of the self. really like this. last line is flawless. i love to find little treasures like this.


    • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
      May 23, 2007
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      Digging deep in the archives are we? Those lips look familiar. Do I know you? Thanks for the comment.

  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 5, 2007
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    Only Three Lines...

    But saying a world of stuff. I like that. This is art and life.

  • myrataal silver member
    October 21, 2006
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    Thought-provoking

    Strong Biblical and legal connotation here. Concise, but powerful.



    Love

    Myra