R aining emotions
A lways miserable
I n my mind &
N ever knowing whats going on
~*~
F alling hard & fast
A round me life is falling apart
L osing balance
L osing consiousness
S ewing together my bleeding wrists
~*~
&
~*~
W inding down a dirt road in my mind
I see a familiar shaddow
N ot knowing whats coming at the end of the road
D aring myself to live
~*~
B racing myself for a war between consciousness and not
L oving life as it rolls
O on down a rough &
W inding drt road
S aved in the end by true love
Author notes
its not very good, but its the best i could come up with while having writers block
Written October 20th, 2006
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babe this poem is amazing! i love it.
i've not really talked to you in eons, i miss you, i'll call you when i can, k?
love ya bunches,
-nicole -
Loved it Sarah.
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deep
I love acrostics and at first it is sad but it leaves hope at the end. I think it is good.Thank you for sharing it with us.
Kari
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