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my love

my love

my love that kept me warm
my love that looked  after me
my love that spent time with me and not his mates
my love that kissed me under the apple tree
my love that did not care what his friends thougt of me
my love that helped me
my love that would do anything for me
my love that all ways made me smile
my love that is all ways there for me
and i love him for nevery all ways in till i die


amyhide

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Written October 20th, 2006

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  • Sweet Jane
    February 7, 2007
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    cool

    Oh beautiful lovlly
    good love poem*ROSE*

  • pinkbaby9
    November 9, 2006
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    i love it it was neat

  • annie
    November 4, 2006
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    Great writing

    Amy, this is such a sad poem and yet I am glad that you wrote so well about your feelings . I am so proud to read your work and you are always teaching me to try harder with my own thoughts and feelings. I will try to applaud now, this is such a wonderful expresion of true friendship and love. Always your FAN, Annie

  • annie
    October 22, 2006
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    Lovely

    Love will always come back to you, even if just as a memory. Love becomes a part of your Soul hold on and all comes around to you. Peace and hope Annie