Dreams just flying away
On the black clouds up in the sky
Loved ones lives fading away
Leaving sorrow inside my heart
Another star up in the sky
Another life has gone
Love and fear have finally met
And taken you away from me
People see my smile
They just don't see it's fake
If only they just knew
What was going through my mind right now
Why did they take you away from me
Why did they make me cry
Everyone leaves like this someday
But I didn't want it to be your time
Do they know how much they hurt me
And my family who loved you so
Life and death is common i know
But when its someone you care about
...... it hurts
Remembering times that have gone by
Smiles we had together
The life you lived was a full one
Why did it have to end
Why did they take you away from me
Why did they make me cry
Everyone leaves like this someday
But I didn't want it to be your time
Do they know how much they hurt me
And my family who loved you so
Life and death is common i know
But when its someone you care about
...... it hurts
You know it is strange now
Not having you here
Life will never be the same without you
Goodbye, You will always be in my heart
Why did they take you away from me
Why did they make me cry
Everyone leaves like this someday
But I didn't want it to be your time
Do they know how much they hurt me
And my family who loved you so
Life and death is common i know
But when its someone you care about
...... it hurts
I will never forget you
I love you
Author notes
This is for my grandad, who sadly passed away yesterday morning. I will never forget you grandad, You will always be in my heart.
Written October 20th, 2006
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this is such a heartfelt piece and is a great tribute to your grandfather... he is still with you, walking by your side..congrats on our work
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a good piece of poetry, though it is in need of some editing i feel, where you are using the ellipses, the right way is three dots ... - spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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I want him to be proud of me, and I really never left, just havent had much of a chance to get online recently. That should change soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it
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I'm sorry to hear about your nan. Both lost on the same day aswell. Thanks for reading. I appreciate it
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I am sorry for your lose my friend, i think you Granddad would be proud of you if he could see this, no, he is proud of you and looking down from heaven and reading this and smilling, a tear of joy in his eye and he blows a kiss to your cheek, keep it flowing, it is good to see youare back, i just wish it was on better terms
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Heart felt
I lost my Nan Yesterday 19th oct 2006 i know how it feels i wrote something very similar..
May they both R.I.P -
thanks
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nice
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