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Time

Going fast
Getting nowhere

Time passed
You didn't notice

you stop to wonder
where have you been
as life passed you by
the life you haven't been living

too late now
for time has passed
no time now
no time to live a life
that's never been

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Written October 20th, 2006

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  • sexykitten87
    October 24, 2006
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    thanx, i got it fixed.

  • sexykitten87
    October 24, 2006
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    I did? OMG. btw, it wasn't the computer, it was me. lol.


  • LyricistFor TheMute
    October 24, 2006
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    amazing write but in case you didnt know you posted the same poem 3 times. lol! it sometimes happens to me too. stupid cuomputers. great write though

  • sexykitten87
    October 24, 2006
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    isn't that true. s


  • Wee Beastie
    October 20, 2006
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    two paws up

    very good
    time is such a fleeting thing

    ~~~Chef W.B.

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