Image by ArtReaper at www.deviantart.com*
I'm the girl that absorbed the sceams
From killer visions and bloody dreams.
I followed a river of forlorn tears
Guided by two gondoliers,
And at the dock I was relieved
Of the foresight I had received;
Now I run through fields of laughter
Forever dancing in the hereafter,
So throw off your fears of death's invite
And follow me to pure delight.
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Shrugs Shoulders
Written October 20th, 2006
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hmmm,this was absalutely beautiful.Nice ryming too.I am so honored to have this in my contest and thanks for entering and good luck.
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Dark. I liked it; found it original. I love the picture, if it's your own work, woot, you are good! Loved your author comments.
About the piece, shrugs
Hehe
Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck.
Keep writing
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Great piece of writing
The rhyming is brilliant in this. I loved this piece. Cannot applaud as I do not have enough points, but I will say, very well done for this. I loved it. -
Ms. Lilly, first thoughtful pic. I like this for it was short yet very descriptive, and most important caught me by surprise. You perfectly illustrated reaching light at the end of the dark tunnel.
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A nice Comforting piece.
well done dear.
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Wonderful! I liked it anyway. The font was a bit hard for these old eyes to see...I would consider lightening it...but well written and thought out. Write on, poet.
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