Hers
Moonlight peeks into our place of seduction
Beams dancing upon the pillow where your sleepy head lay
Drops of Jupiter fluttering upon your tempting lips
As I silently watch you murmur my name in a dream
Your body, sprawled upon satin sheets
Masculinity out for my eyes to gaze upon
Teasing, taunting me to touch
My loins tremble in ticklish need
His
I wake to your warm tender flesh
Pressing against my feverish thighs
Rubbing my manhood, making it want you
To only be inside, feeling your wetness
My orbs travel across your face,
Fixating upon your enchanting purse
Wanting nothing but to kiss you deeply
To feel you in my loving embrace
Hers
Your swollen member pressing firmly against my femininity
I can feel your heartbeat in unison with mine
As it sends a tingling ambiance through my soul
Aching, longing to feel your love
Your strong arms pulling me close
As our lips find each other in heavenly song
Your hands massaging the small of my back
Heightening the fever flowing throughout my body
His
Our tongues tango in a fervent collision
Your hands on my neck pulling me closer
Feeling your moist nectar glazing the tip of my manhood
Body trembling delicately from my touch
Caressing your face, as you slide atop me
My member glides across your crease
Feeling your hot succulence coating me
Heat escaping your body, filling me with wanton sensations
Theirs
Our bodies move in perfection
Hips grinding as sated serenity is achieved
Lustful moans and sweet aromas fill the air
As two become one in accord with the other
Legs locked firmly in sensual seduction
Meeting every downward thrust of insatiable delight
A more beautiful language has never been spoken
Than that which has never crossed lips
A contest entry
- Love Is A Verb by SerenityNChains.
700 points, ended August 4, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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OK...well now, this was a bit racier than I wanted for this contest. It is good, for erotica, but again I wanted poems on love as a verb, not making love...LOL. I give you kudos for raising my temp though. Thanks for entering.
Serenity
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Oh, beautifully written. Yet again I would have liked a little bit of punctuation.
This was gorgeous. Bravo. Thank you for entering and following my rules
Love,
Marisa
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Thank you so much sweetheart Krys and I appreciate you very much....Michael
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aah hot for sure very nice poem. mm very nice indeed...
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LOVE love love the whole collaboration thing on this subject. What more perfect topic to write a collaboration on, in fact? My favorite part was that there were the his and hers and then the theirs...beautiful structure. Thanks so much for entering!
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Sooo very wonderfully erotic, you guys! Geez! You sure know how to make a body sweat! Very well done! All the best to you in the contest!!!
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Magnificent
excellent write of sensuality and love. Your words show the beauty of what inspires two people to truly bask in the ambiance of passionate delight! Excited that you are back with us!!! Love ya, Lp7 -
Michael,
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! you two write sooooooooo well together! This is, well this is just is sooooooooooo sensual and wonderful! I love it! It is sooooo good to have you back home, safe and sound!
Love ya,
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Thank you so much mom and dawn for your kind words reguarding our collab...........Michael
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Great collaboration you two have penned here - you have worked together well on this one. DId you want the ? after hips? There is no other punctuation in this poem -not sure if that was just an accident. Keep collaborating.
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Awesome
Wonderfully done. Beautiful piece of erotica here. Soft and sensual, done with taste. A piece to be treasured..and require a cold shower...lol. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. You worked well together. Dawn
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