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Lost Control




I find myself lost in the sensual feel
Of leather gloves – and satin lips
As my breasts swell achingly
Into rawhide – covered fingertips

It begins a sacred odyssey
Hair and legs – spread on the floor
As you drink of my essence
I begin to “beg” for more

White teeth graze; insatiably
Upon my ivory neck
I savor every nip
I glory in each peck

Trembling – as you gently
Turn me to face the ground
I feel your whip’s caresses
Sweet lashes raining down

It is an unexpected change
From your tender touch
I want to say, “this isn’t right”
But I like it – way too much

Soft, at first you stroke the skin
Till I tremble – warm and wet
Then harder as I burn
But you’re not finished yet

With tangled fist in coiled tresses
I’m lost – in erotic extremes
And you demand surrender
As I soar in rapture’s dreams

Then as you savagely conquer
Amidst cries of lost control
I… immersed in fevered ecstasy
Confer on you, my soul!



Patricia Gibson-Little

Author notes

I don't think this is as dark as some of the others, but here it is.
Written April 30th, 2003

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  • AngelSeeker silver member
    May 4, 2003
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    Thank you both very much. I can't wait until I have some time to spend looking at more of the poetry on this site.


  • May 2, 2003
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    i loved the sensuality to this..

    makes it way more erotic then the regular erotic!!!


  • kalifornia
    May 1, 2003
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    Groovy

    Amazing. Thanks!

    Kali