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Delflurious: an Abstract

Carnivorous they fly.
Today
Feast on carrion rigor.

Diaphanous skirts abide:
Artist's
Sentimental inequities.

Leg-wing.
High-rise distillates.
Super-articulate hyper-links.

Online sanitarium,
Sectalary.
Program of juniors & junkies.

Excruciating beauty.  Hope's
Fierce poetic tendencies,
Capacities for kindness & love.

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Written October 19th, 2006

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  • white stone
    October 24, 2006
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    "Online sanitarium,
    Sectalary.
    Program of juniors & junkies."
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA...cough.
    I, too, must look up a couple of words iaphanous and Deflurious. But as Wanda wrote, intelligent intuition for sure. From now on I will call you the goofy samurai. Your humor makes you dangerous, as it conceals the RAZOR sharp truths you convey. High-rise distillates, huh? glub glub....mmmmm....tasty!


  • klassy lassy
    October 19, 2006
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    All of the first four stanzas are just window dressing for the fith...now I have to go look up words. I can see they will be just as dead on as the last three lines, just not nearly as pretty.