Be these the last lines I write for her
But not the last feelings I will feel for her
For though my heart has sunk
It still feels the love which had made it drunk
Though she has come and passed
My love was built to last
Yes, I will move on and make my part
But she will always hold a special place in my heart
Author notes
Yeah I went through the worst breakup in all time. I should hate her. But I am worried about her and care about her and stuff you know? She wont read this. And if she does she wont respond to it. But thats the way things go. Anyways I hope you enjoyed this poem.
Written October 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- My Own Kind of Love by Paradise Prisoner.
1000 points, ended November 15, 2006, 59 entries
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I'm so so sorry for making you feel this way...I never meant to hurt you. I was just stupid and I hate myself for it. Please forgive me. I know its hard and I'm never going to forgive myself. I love you with everything and all that I am. You're my knight in shining amour. I love you. Please forgive me and what I have done.
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Thank you all for your wonderful comments. It means a lot to me.
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aww this was short and sweet! i really liked it!
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This was such a very sentimental piece. I loved it and hoped it helped your healing.Thanks for sharing it with us.
Kari -
This is honest and well written. I sense a passionate drive of a healing heart from you.
Oh well, guess broken love is only good for posting GREAT poems like this one.
Never drop the pen!
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I did enjoy this poem. Thank you for sharing. Breakups can be aweful. And you shouldn't hate her, since she does have a special place in your heart. You should show it to her anyways, as long as you know she looked at it, I think you might feel a little better.
Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing!
~ImmortalUndead~
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