Words lay transposed
feelings free
and emotions naked.
This last letter
a poem of love
of a broken soul.
Hold me high
hold me dear
hold me up to fall.
Words are the knife
feelings this gun
and emotions the bullets.
Your eyes
they peirce a wounded heart.
Your touch
brings death to all around.
Your kiss
like poisen on these lips.
You burn
you break
you turn
world upside down.
You walk
you run
and leave this in shambles.
Your words
slice through me.
Your feelings
shoot right through me.
Your emotions
a lodged in like this bullet.
I swore I would always
always be here for you.
So here in these bloody words
I will lay forever.
Here in these crusted lines
I will lie amore dead.
love this gimmick
heart break your newest hobbie
and guilt the latest fad.
Pass me by
I'll be back around.
and these words
will remain.
Forever and always
words will remain.
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words will always remain
Written October 19th, 2006
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awwww thanks so much
I am glad you like it
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this is amazing...
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awww thanks so much
I am really glad you like it
that makes me happy
yeah well ususally the best inspiration comes from the worst of sitations
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Im speachless... this is beautiful. Your verse structure and analogies go perfectly together. Im sorry something saddened you enough to inspire this poem, but you put it into words wonderfully.
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