the moment we met online,
destiny changed forever
poetry
stunned my senses
diction, voice, turn of a phrase
prophetic utterances
of ghostly originality
foretold something
magnificent
(shafts of sunlight through lost skies
golden hand of an angel on your shoulder)
voice within
whispered
~paths will cross~
someday...
then we stepped into each others' world
talked on the phone
the first time
for five hours
my voice quivered quietly
hands shook
from utter emotional intensity
body sweat
afterwards
I didn't eat for forty-eight hours
slept only a few
lost three pounds
online
a white sorceress cast
a magic spell
typing four words
I love you, dear
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Written October 19th, 2006
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Yes, I have read this before. I really liked it. It's the stuff I was looking for in the contest. Thanks for entering.
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that must be how you know you've found "the one". the poem was lovely. i love the line about a voice within whispering that paths will cross someday. It was exquisite! The entire piece just flows
anyways, have a nice day
luck in the contest
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I Love Love. So much it hurts. This is great heart candy, watching this dance, watermelon boy. Your imagery, as usual, is crystal clear.
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Awwww! You are giving me goose bumps! But listen, man, you have to eat! You'll waste away to nothing before she gets there. I don't want you to be just an echo!
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Did my comment disappear? I know I commented on this wonderful flow that drifted from your heart to this page.... What happened? ~Tia
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