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feeling

denial
lies beneath his eyes
silent cries
regret
destined to forget
secrets floating in the sky
empty
inside myself i hide

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me
Written October 19th, 2006

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  • Fillthee Nae
    August 1, 2007
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    very interesting...

    powerful, short in length but it's beautiful chaotic.


  • Broken Machine
    July 31, 2007

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    Wow, that's a great poem. You said so much with so few words, you are very talented, keep up the great work.


  • Ash-
    January 18, 2007
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    ohhh

    goood..I relly like.
    Whats got you so down girl.