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Still of Night

Nothing moved in the still of night
Nothing but a gentle breeze
It seemed for once that all was right
As you heard the quiet rustling trees

Nothing but a gentle breeze
Disturbed my thoughts, sitting by the stream
As you heard the quiet, rustling trees
A light shone down, a gorgeous beam

Disturbed, my thoughts, sitting by the stream
I stared at the crescent moon
A light shone down, a gorgeous beam
And far away I heard the cry of a lune

I stared at the crescent moon
It seemed for once that all was right
And far away I heard the cry of a lune
Nothing moved in the still of night

Author notes

a pantoum from a poetry project that i had to do for english before i actually wrote poetry. i just foudn it today
Written October 18th, 2006

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  • twilight coming
    October 18, 2006
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    oOo. Pretty. It was interesting too, because I kept expecting something to happen, so it gave it a rather eerie feel.
    Tasty.

    love.
    sis.


  • Pretty -n- Pink
    October 18, 2006
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    this poem was relaxing to me..i liked it...ur very talented keep up the good work!