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Troys Travails

Troy set out in life full of hope
And promises troys journey was
Made at the onset easy for him
As troy was a warrior and a
Warrior is a fighter


Troy the fighter never had it
So tough never had it so good
But the good was the interest
Of the bad because the bad wanted
To be good and were not accepted
So troy the good had to make a
Compromise


Be good to the people that took
Troy as good and goody goody his
Life troy the fighter was  good
And troy the good became the villages
Hero as troy the fighter troy the good
Was good throughout his life and the
People took troy the good to be good
And troy the good became the villages
Hero and troy the good was named the
Troy the trojan the villages good

writtten by william saint

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Written October 18th, 2006

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