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Wish I Could Take It All Away

Wish I could take it all away,
Want to take away of your pain
And hold you until the very end.

Your sadness kills me inside,
Drives me insane to know that I
Can't help like I want to.

Your smile makes my life complete,
And not seeing it on your face,
Rips apart my heart.

Your words when laced with sorrow,
Make me wish there was no tomorrow,
That I could stay and comfort you for forever.

I doubt I'm strong enough though,
I can carely comfort myself,
But I'd try my hardest to make you happy.

You mean everything to me.
Your happiness is my happiness.
Your sadness is my sadness.

I wish I could wipe all of your tears away.

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Written October 18th, 2006

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  • Jake Wesley
    October 20, 2006
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    Really really good Brittnie!!!! So sad though. But so true...awsome one Foxxy. Full of emotion. I really like it.


  • October 18, 2006
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    yay for the new poem tis really good too