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before I fall asleep

Before I fall asleep
I can’t help it so I weep

I remember the sweet taste of your tear
The one saying more than all words can swear
Therefore so precious and most endeared
The ethereal beauty it has revealed

Drowned in the picture of your hazel eyes
My lips greedily groping for you without surprise
Like a drug addict I’m crying for the moon
And praying to see you again soon

Don't even try to say a thing
Together in the storm we will cling
I know how much you care
Of this I’m fully aware

Now my soul is healed
‘Cause our hearts have been sealed
Only waiting for you to blow in
Not caring for the actual sin

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Written October 18th, 2006

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  • PaulaHUGADDICT
    November 4, 2006
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    thanks.. :-)


  • Lyre-Bird-
    November 3, 2006
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    An amazing write you have penned..... I like the flow of your words... I have taken this as a partner has died, or a partner had cheated.... Keep writing
    Tracey


  • HerexButxGone
    November 3, 2006
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    i just had to comment on this when i read it,its so emotional,i loved it.its absolutely perfect.


  • Nereida Nightshade
    November 3, 2006
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    Wow that is beautiful. I love it,very well done I really like the last lines:
    Cause our hearts have been sealed
    Only waiting for you to blow in
    Not caring for the actual sin
    You have a way with words!