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To Enter Or Not To Enter

Ka-thumpa
Ka-thumpa
Ka-thumpa

Is that my heart racing
or something more sinister?
This place is kinda creepy,
windows seem to be peeping at me.

Buump
Buump
Buump

Someone must be following me,
nah, just the shutters...
I think, gulp, I hope.
Maybe bats' fluttering wings.

Hoooo
Hoooo
Hoooo

What's that!?!
A fiend asking who dares pass?
Is it an owl or the wind in the trees?
I wish I knew for sure.


Kaka
Kaka
Kaka

Oh No! Must be a goblin
laughing at my fright.
How did I get into this plight?
Could be a crow calling to it's mates.

Crrreeeaaakkk
The door opens...
"Come in my dear" Vampiress calls,
wait, that voice sounds familiar!
It is just my best friend.

What a relief!
The house's gloom was only for show,
I was not doomed to go in
it was all a party planned just for me.

Happy Halloween! My friend got me good.

Author notes

This is not one of my best, I am not that good at on the spot writes. Plus with a four year old hollering, \
Written October 18th, 2006

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  • darlee77 gold member
    October 23

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    So glad it was you and not me. lol Very good write. lol


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    October 28, 2006
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    It can get distracting with the kids needing attention I think you've done a great job on this. It really is full of the halloween spirit. Thanks for joining the part for halloween, it looks to be a great one! Great halloween piece!


  • Baby Girl 25
    October 18, 2006
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    its good