She is the Creator, she is the master,
If you were the fastest, she'd be even faster;
She is the magician, she is the enchantress,
She is genuinely better than the best;
The creator of magic, mystic, wizardry,
Perhaps the most loved woman in humanity;
The person who's got everyone hooked onto her books-
The young, the old, the honest, the crooks!
The author of the world's best-selling tales,
Who lives in Edinburgh, Scotland near Wales;
Her books are charming, fascinating, enthralling,
Her struggle to success is truly heartwrenching!
The way she's reached her goal is a fantastic specimen:
For people to achieve their talents hidden,
We are transported into her world when reading her expressions,
A world which fascinates, and broadens our imagination;
She's carved a niche for herself with such dignity,
She's etched her name onto eternity;
If awesome was a digit, she would be infinity,
If inspiring was beauty, she would be very pretty;
She takes you through moments of grief, anxiety, laughter,
She is the author of the magnanimous HARRY POTTER,
She loves, she teaches, she writes, she inspires,
She has given me the dream to which I aspire!
Author notes
If you still dont understand who she is ... JK ROWLING...!!! She is mi teacher... who inspired me to write!
I HAVE READ THE RULES
Written October 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Rounds contest (first round) by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended April 22, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*PICTURE INSPIRED*~ AND OPTIONS*~ COME ON IN by Free1977.
550 points, ended April 30, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Three Option Contest by wingsofgold25.
1125 points, ended June 7, 2007, 15 entries
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What did you think
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Thank you for your entry to the contest.
This was a well constructed piece.
Wish you Good Luck.
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oops! sorry, this is option 2! someone who has influenced my life..
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AWESOME WRITE
I LOVE THIS WHAT A WONDERFUL WAY TO SHOW THIS AUTHOR SOME LOVE...WONDERFULLY WRITTEN ALWAYS FRANCES
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wow really great poem with strng emotions...nice write
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He, he!
No, I understood who she was immediatley. I share your passion, friend. A very nice tribute that I'm sure she would love to see and would be very flattered. A very nice write and welcome to round two! -
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I guess I am going to have to start here first everyday to see what new poem you have for us. Love the vocabulary the most, I am a word nut, even though my spelling is less than desirable, more often than not. The flow and punctuation was right on--like the praise you gave to such a great author, she is wonderful isn't she?
Thanks again
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This is a wonderful piece of writing. And you are preaching to the choir here honey. I absolutely love her books. You did a wonderful job here, I love the way it describes her and yet flows so nicely. Thank you so much for entering this contest, I am really glad I got to read this poem. thank you again. -
Very Good
As a tribute very touching - as a piece of writing - complex, not bad complex, just complex. Writing about people who have inspired us is difficult, becuase why they inspire us often goes beyond descriptive words and feelings and certainly to cram it into a poem is hard.
I could see several themes within here - achieveing dreams - following talent - giving people a chance to bleive in themsleves - dignity. the poem may have worked better it was focused on one of these issues, that sad if you writing a tribute then you want it all in once piece.
The ryhme structure is brave, there are times it does limit the poem - it is great to have the flow - particularly in along complex piece but sometimes you need to be more free and let you emotions express themselves.
Of course ultimately these pieces provide enormous joy for the author - they allow them to make and pay their tribute and think these peices acan only be judged that way - and that is how it should be.
A heartwarming tribute.
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dear shuvi,
your love and admiration for j.k. rowling is so touching. I really hope you will send her your poem, because it will certainly touch her very much.
also, your poem is very well crafted, wonderful rhymes and flow, and excellent choice of vocabulary. great job !
I can understand your feelings, since I have also been enchanted by harry potter, especially the very first movie.
and I can understand now how you had chosen your last username
I wish you the best of luck in this contest,
much love and many hugs,
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Shuvi i think you DEFINITELY need to send this poem to J.K.Rowling!!! This is fabuloud work! Nice language and well-chosen words as usual but this one reflects a pure admiration and genuine fondness for that fabulous writer!
way to go!
and you're absolutely right: she is a genius that woman! she writes wonderfully...not unlike u, lil sis
anyway take care, see u around and keep up that glorious work!
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I knew it was J. K. Rowling before five lines were up, you are young and so it adds up that she is the hottest writer of today in fiction, so it stands to reason. I liked your poem very much. You do have a talent with words. You like to use a lot of them don't you. I don't. I count them syllable by syllable. Scot in me I guess. LOL. Nice meeting you, and reading you. See ya around sometime. Walt.
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Excellent
I do believe you have capture the escents of inspriration, You leave no douth that she is a wonderful person. J.K. Rowling is an inspiration and a wonderful writer as are you. Way to go poet. -
Ahhh J.K Rowling
Now how did I guess that! Really good write Shuvi! Your imagery to describe her is excellent.You know her very well through all the reading you have done and this shines through in your write .You have written with such passionate feelings and they often tend to be your best writes.
Great work indeed and best to my grandaughter in this contest
Granny Gaylene
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this was very good dear one... somehow I knew you would write about JK Rowling, not sure why I thought that ,but when I sent you the link to this contest that was my first thought.
I am glad to see you wrote for it, and I wish you the best of luck as well.
many hugs hun
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