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Lost In The Moonlight

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Lost In The Moonlight

The hardiness of roots so deep,
misplaced trust let sadness creep.
Wander soul with lost intention,
mindful thoughts meet contention.

Wistful feelings beneath the moon,
as life long dreams now lay in ruin.
My endless search till break of day,
a silent voice that needs to pray.

Solace sought in desperation,
moonlit sky of inspiration.
Vastness reflects upon my eyes,
this worthless feeling I despise.

In sun's warmth, I shall now dwell,
my life no more, a living hell.
In faith I found, my strength within,
freed my roots, from all my sin.

My dark cloud with silver lining,
light my way, be defining.
Moonlight shadows, cast aways,
be no more, upon my days.




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Written October 18th, 2006

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 20, 2006
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    LOVELY COMMENT !!!!!!!

    Thank you for the wonderful comment. Great contest. Take care, Sandy

  • Dove Moderators member
    October 19, 2006
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    Inner strengths from man or tree are measured in just moments in time. This poem I found to be reflective of ones own worth and needs. Nicely done Thank you very much for the entry and best wishes in the contest
  • Rudolf
    October 18, 2006
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    deeply rooted winner

    picture was painted,a poem you grew
    words were seeded,nutured by you
    entered a contest,soon will arise
    moonlite trophy,well rooted surprize
    rudolf,good luck in the contest

  • momiloco
    October 18, 2006
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    inspirational

    this was a great read about courage, strength and being inspired to pull one's self out the depression and move forward. from the darkness into the light. the positive outlook. its always darkest before the dawn. your imagery was superb. this should give all who need it inspiration. maybe the tree symbolizes a rebirth, since every year they shed their leaves until the following spring. great write and good luck in the contest

  • Jeri silver member
    October 18, 2006
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    Great write. I love the ideas all of you have gotten from this picture. I love your poem.
    EXCELLENT!!!!!!
    God's touch
    Jeri

  • Reeds Heart
    October 18, 2006
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    this is a really deep poem i enjoyed it thank you for sharing

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Wow, this is so deep and melancholy! Very beautiful and soulful write. This picture has inspired so many different impressions. Great imagination and creativity in this write. Good luck in the contest. Jeannie

  • PrincessOfFire
    October 18, 2006
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    Normally a flow would be perfect when matched with syllables, but here I felt something was missing.
    Wander soul with lost intention, how about wandering
    mindful thoughts meet contention. now meet contention?
    Over all I found it pleasing and delightful to read. Very good work.
    Good luck and God bless. Rose
    Edited on Oct 18, 9:10 because ''.
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