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TImeless ***


A sentinental
Standing alone
Moonbeams shining dreams

Weathered and worn
Timeless memories
Deeply rooted  belief

Whispers of mother earth
Singing ancient songs
Only I can hear

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Written October 17th, 2006

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  • Piper77
    December 24, 2006

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    Ooh, I like how it paints a beautiful picture right in front of my eyes. Great write and keep writing!

    *snap*


  • individuality gold member
    December 3, 2006
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  • FifthDove
    November 29, 2006
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    Congratulations


  • suseann
    October 23, 2006
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    Forest breezes carry whispers to ears in a message heard by the beholder of need.This was very pretty.~~Suseann


  • wishintreeUK
    October 20, 2006
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    Congratulations on your trophy placement, well done

    ~Katie~


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 19, 2006
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    Congratulations on your trophy in this contest
    Gaylene


  • FifthDove
    October 19, 2006
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    “Singing ancient songs, only I can hear” Oh these lines grabbed at my spirit. This poem is profound to say the least. Nice work!!! Thank you very much for the entry and best wishes in the contest


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 18, 2006
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    yes, I agree about the msytical edge to this poem. Our poems are very much alike in the whispering.


  • wishintreeUK
    October 18, 2006
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    Wonderful images from the words you have penned here, has a mystical feel to it that sits well with the theme of the graphic give to work from. Well done and best wishes for the contest.

    ~Katie~


  • individuality gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    i will get the accordian out and we can build a small fire and sing along with life, i am sure there will be some room for dance and merriment too spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • Catnipstalker
    October 17, 2006
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    Thank you

  • deleteit
    October 17, 2006
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    Oh this is good, good luck to you too

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