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Retrograde

From aches amass
Fields of pain breach the orbit
Hypoderm level
Quavering until there is nothing left of the surface

As tributaries become the ocean
Trickle passively into subsistence
For looming tidal waves collision
Becoming one

High risen edifices
Jar into plastic orgasms
Overflowing cups of unsown genus
These waves wash life to no shores
Pouring their bellies into there lovers womb
To kiss so hard there is nothing left

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Written October 11th, 2006

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  • individuality gold member
    March 30

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    From aches amass
    Fields of pain breach the orbit
    Hypoderm level
    Quavering until there is nothing left of the surface

    As tributaries become the ocean
    Trickle passively into subsistence
    For looming tidal waves collision
    Becoming one

    High risen edifices
    Jar into plastic orgasms
    Overflowing cups of unsown genus
    These waves wash life to no shores
    Pouring their bellies into there lovers womb
    To kiss so hard there is nothing left

    good po

  • Alan McClary
    May 23, 2007

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    YO I loved da plastic orgasms its like ghetto friction when you walk da beat day in day out and its like
    ...yeah you be waitin for nature to drop the bomb on corporate America and false existance

    Word up but for realz Im gonna bookmark your stuff cuz its like sensual surreal wordplay czech it


  • mad hattie
    February 7, 2007

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    fascinating textures of words...senses engaged, aesthetics cannot be missed...love it!

    one love
    Justine