A loving, happy and beautiful person always well dressed.
Vicky had a personality, that would out do the rest.
Never a bad comment to say to any one around
So trusting, caring and loving, made you smile when you were down.
Till one day she meet a man and feel in love.
She gave her self to this man and never saw him for what he was
With time the true colors of this man came out.
Hurting Vicky, cursing and every word he’d shout.
Yet Vicky made excuses for this mans ugly moods.
For her love blinded her and in him she still saw good.
More and more he inflicted pain and used her as he liked.
Vicky with her loving heart excepted all the pain, despite.
The swelling of her face and the blacking of her eyes.
Every night you hear her pleads and her lonely cries.
Monday morning she told him, she was tired of his hate.
She was going to leave him before it was to late.
With that comment he got anger and hit her several times.
She told him if he killed her, she would be back for his life.
He grabbed her by her hair and beat her against the rail.
Didn’t stop till he saw her face had turned so pale.
Poor lovely Vicky just laid there in the pool of blood.
He didn’t care, he covered her with a rug.
He left Vicky there all night as he fell asleep.
Tuesday morning she returned though the walls she slipped.
At the foot of the bed with a smile she slowly appeared.
Unaware his eyes opened wide as he suddenly reared.
I told you I’d come back to take your life and I’m here.
With out a single word his face turned pale and died of fear.
Loving Vicky has gone to heaven with all her love to share.
That man was punished for his crime, with death and lives in hell.
Author notes
I had a friend and many years ago she died. Her husband beat her to death with the rail of the bed. Yet it was scarey because I didn't know she was dead. She had died on a Monday, and the morning of Tuesday I saw her walking to her apartment as I seen her many time coming from the store. And that night they found her husband dead, they say it was a heart attack. But the people that found him say he had a scary look on his face. I think she came back and scared him to death. Thats what he gets for he was a mean SOB and Vicky always told him she would come back from the dead for him.
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Awesome. you had me at the title and the poem only made it better. I'm sorry that this had to happen to your friend. The way that you describe her really makes me believe that she was a really beaustiful person both inside and out, but that guy was a real dick. He had no right to take her life, but I guess he took that for granted until she took his. That's what he gets.
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I always tell people that make me mad that I will come back and pull there leggs Hahahahaha thank for reading my write and your great comments (Lisa)
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Freaky stuff, I guess it does all come back to you in the end. I’m sure sadly there has been many people in this situation I wonder how many got revenge? all the best with this
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Yes it was her birthday the other day and I was thinking of her so I wrote write. Thank you for reading my poem greatly appreciated (Lisa)
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oh my~~ that's soo scarry.
so sorry about what happened to your friend
she sure did get her revenge in -
Wow thanks for reading my write and your wonderful comments. Sad but true relationships can be so violent. Just that the couples need to know when go get out so this don't happen. Thank again greatly appreciated (Lisa)
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awesome
that is awesome...and a measure of revenge...for you can kill a body but the soul lives on...he got his just rewards....it's a shame that relationships are surrounded by violence..even sadder that if it's not in death, its in torment...outstanding write...smile...hugs, David
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