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Strange Little Voices

Strange Little voices
Have you heard, As I have heard?
The one about the enter voices of man.
The one that is suppose to tell us weather,
Something is good are bad.

Some say that it is a six sense.
Some say that it is interwischion.
Me I say I don’t know what it is.
I don’t care what it is just as long as it works
To keep me on the right path of life.

By the way, What do you think it is?

(c) Rose Patrick April 30, 2003
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Written April 30th, 2003

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  • December 26, 2003
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    well I don't know what it is but if someone talk in my head it is probaly something I drank. good poem


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 18, 2003
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    I belive that we all are a piece of god/the universe and the little voice is not one but many that we intuitively know, trust and listen to.

    Beautiful write here and a wonderful question


  • angelica silver member
    May 14, 2003
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    definately the voice of your angel's and guides,they are there to help and guide you.
    enjoyed it very much rose,thank you for sharing it

  • KadamsWandler
    May 1, 2003
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    This poem really gets you thinking, good write, I enjoyed it.
    Katie


  • April 30, 2003
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    I just have voices in my head. Plain and simple

    I like this one.

    ~Genocide


  • Geneva
    April 30, 2003
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    excellent

    I love a good play with words like this one.
    Actually my voice has always been the people that live with me, like my mother use to nag me -don't slouch and chew your nails - and now my kids do.
    I used the word "whether" to mean weather in one of my poems (2 way street) Is that a cool co-incidence.
    I've been promising myself to get over here and read you. but now the kids are home
    sigh more nagging!
    be back tomorrow


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    April 30, 2003
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    I agree with Tim
    I will stick to the voice of the wings and halo
    Different this one was i liked it
    I have up a new one come see me
    Luv ya
    Susan


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 30, 2003
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    I believe God made us with a conscience, and that inner voice tells you how to live your life right and also what's wrong...
    We all have to make our own judgements, listen to the one with wings and a halo, lol!!!!

    A very thought provoking write, it's cute too!!!
    Thanks for sharing and pen on!

    -Timothy


  • LadyXofX9XLives
    April 30, 2003
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    I like this!! I like the thought and questions about the voices that tell us right from wrong and love from hate. I love the wonder behind this poem! Thank you for sharing! *Lady*

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