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Woman of Poetry: for Night Hope

I've never touched your soft face
nor kissed your tender lips.

I've never gazed with lucid calm into your eyes.
Brown, you said.

I hear your voice only over the telephone.
I read the written word you send each day.

Your words now inspire my life.

Your heart is wider than the sky.
Your subtle thought and love create
sublime language that so eloquently cuts to the marrow.

With a fiercely gentle twist of metaphor
you leave me suddenly breathless, suspended, and wordless.

Some warn against what we're doing.

Do we listen to them or the voices within?

There's nothing much between us,
only distance and a little time.

Matters of the heart transcend such things.

Even the darknesses of our pasts are illuminated,
communicated and laid to rest.

Poetry is the vehicle that transports truth.

We both write it, yes, yet I humble myself
before you, and rightly so.

You're my Woman of Poetry: I love you.




 

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Written October 17th, 2006

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  • Poetdontknowit
    November 21, 2006
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    sweet

    VERY WELL WRITTEN WITH RAW EMOTION. I LOVE THE FLOW OF THE PIECE. VERY NICELY DONE. I TRULY ENJOYED READING AND REVIEWING YOUR AWESOME POETIC PIECE! KEEP ON PENNING!
    ''''''''''''''''''''''POETDONTKNOWIT;;;;;;;;;;;;;


  • nilav
    November 21, 2006

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    presence in absence-feeling the magic touch of love with vibrant words--beautiful... thank you for keeping my best friend Wanda in that paradise..


  • lindadoster
    November 21, 2006
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    I felt the emotion in this and feel it came from your heart. Love is a strange thing.
    I read it twice and loved the words you used, they seemed to fix where they needed to.
    The only thing is, it was alittle hard to fit it all together but its still a good poem

    lindadoster


  • mjseattle silver member
    November 2, 2006
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    Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving such an encouraging comment. I do appreciate it. Thanks again. ~Mark

  • amalgum
    November 2, 2006
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    Excellent

    An original and beautiful 'love' poem. Excellently done.


  • klassy lassy
    October 19, 2006
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    The roses are opening and the aroma is sweet on these pages. I can only sigh at the tenderness and hope on both the pages I am reading. Big smiles for the radiance and heart connections.
    ~ klassy

    By the way, your poems are very good!

  • Thedragonisgone
    October 18, 2006
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    This is just fantastic! I'm so glad I came upon your work. I've been reading Wanda's for quite some time. Very happy for ya... This is lovely..

  • Rudolf
    October 18, 2006
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    words not yet written

    poems catch women,i think you should know
    how i caught mine,a few poems ago
    class we were taking,both her and me
    relationship issues,shared past history
    she caught my eye,viewpoints she'd share
    awoke my interest,a poem i'd prepare
    ask her for coffee,next thing i knew
    were almost married,undividable two
    rudolf
    check out my poem "are you interested"This was the start of our relationship,it's evolved into something very special indeed.poetry the water that nutured this seed,we'll get married this summer, starting to make plans.First i have to ask her(poeticly asking for her hand in marriage)anything less would simply not be up to snuff,let me know what you think.


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Mark, I can see you have this friend of mine on Cloud no. 9. I am so happy for you both. Reading this poem makes my heart soar for her - and I wish you just the best. Go for it - true love is hard to come by; so hold on tight and enjoy the journey. May this seed blossom and bear the most wonderful fruits. And hey, pretty woman, I am right there beside you

    ~ Nicolette


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 17, 2006
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    MJ, Looks like you tugged some heart strings here, and rightfully so. Beautiful poem.
    G A

  • ocerus
    October 17, 2006
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    It sounds like you guys are an item! If so, I hope it all works out. As to the distance, well screw it. Once you meet face to face you will know if it's real. If it is, God bless you! You are one lucky man. And if it doesn't, hey. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. You can't be afraid to take a chance, and true love is always worth the risk! Good luck man!!! - ocerus


  • poesy canvas
    October 17, 2006
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    Great portrait to Dear Wanda,mjseattle!


  • punkrckr15
    October 17, 2006
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    yayness!

    it sound like an internet relation ship... i wish i had a bf like that.. nice job btw!


  • soulfultia gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Ahhhhh what wonderful comments and words of encouragment. I expected no less. Had to check back to see how this is effecting fellow poets. Makes me want to break into song "love is in the air"....Ohhh, that is right...I can't sing! Well, I will be humming it silently , ~Tia


  • lovelifelive gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    amazing passion so felt just amazing


  • suthrnbell84
    October 17, 2006
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    Wow, I mean really wow! So much passion for two people who have not met face-to-face. So eloquently written.


  • godsshoeshine
    October 17, 2006
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    Ahhh so sweet you are indeed. Distance will only prevail if you let it. Do not succumb to the powers of rational thought as it usually takes us nowhere. This is really sweet.


  • October 17, 2006
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    awesome

    absolutley beautiful! It's a very beautiful well written poem. keep writing!


  • DeadxxDaisies
    October 17, 2006
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    So beautiful. If only we could all be distinguished as poetry women lol. XD
    Especially enjoyed the lines
    I've never gazed with lucid calm into your eyes.
    Brown, you said.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    October 17, 2006
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    Superb/romantic/unique

    A marvelous write and a great tribute to, Night Hope, who is a fine poet indeed.


  • nichtmich silver member
    October 17, 2006
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    Eloquent

    This is an adorable ode to Nighthope. We have lots of soulmates in this world, and it is breathtaking when we do One teeny tiny critique "Some warn against what were doing" Perhaps "we're", certainly not a flaw, just a little interruption in the flow of an otherwise blissful read. Best wishes in the competition.

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 17, 2006
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    Beautiful! I know Night Hope is going to adore this... maybe even shed tears of joy.
    Thank you so much for sharing and I hope you win in the contest!
    Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing!

    ~ImmortalUndead~

  • FindingFate
    October 17, 2006
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    Wanda is am amazing woman. This is what caught my interest when I decided to click. I am glad that you feel this way for her. She is so deserving of all the goodness in the world. May God bless you both in love and lasting companionship...Trina

  • luvdrkchocolate
    October 17, 2006
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    Oh! What a really lovely piece that you have written here! I like this one! I think it's great when someone opens wide and lets out all their true thoughts and feelings about someone out. It all sounds so honest and true. A kind of reaching out with your hand. The softness of your words reminded me of a warm blanket in winter. I'm sure the person you wrote this for must have felt the same. I think that you have done a good job of expressing yourself here. So thanks for featuring this so that we all had a chance to share your words and feelings with you!


  • King Muhaha
    October 17, 2006
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    awwww, loves cute, i don'e normaly say that but i'm on a sugar high so everythings WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • To Heart
    October 17, 2006
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    That was very thoughtful of you to do that. Every word of this poem has thoroughly explained your admiration and love for this person. Very nice of you!


  • Kokaze
    October 17, 2006
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    It's a beautiful emotion, love. I've always maintained that love is the focus, not who it is between. If you truly love her, that's the important part.

    But as with any and all love, you must keep your head. Don't let her become your whole life, because one day she won't be everything you desire; not necessarily forever, but long enough to hurt you irreversibly.

    I love how you wrote this poem, though. It's... powerful, evocative. I know your feelings exactly, but perhaps I am biased. I once felt the same.


  • pixxiepoetess
    October 17, 2006
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    This is just the sweetest thing. It's a well-written poem with a great message. I hope she likes it. --->pixxie<---


  • natari gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    This is beautiful and I would like nothing more than for Wanda to be happy in love.This expresses love and makes me believe you are a true gentleman.I wish you both joy and love.I know Wanda will cherish this poem.
    ~helen

  • in-the-twilight
    October 17, 2006
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    Very sweet and extremely beautiful!!!!!!! I liked this a lot!!!!!!! Great and amazing poem here!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!! It was so great and I like this a lot!!!!!!! I wish I could write this!!!!!!! Romantic!!!!!!! Rock On (again)!!!!!!!
    xoxo
    Meg


  • Theater Of Dreams
    October 17, 2006
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    Yay!

    To HELL with those with warnings...LOVE CONQUERS ALL. So how far do you gotta go??? LOL!

    Great stuff!


  • cutiepie gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Lovely

    Aw...now thats a love poem if ever I read one I would imagine "Night Hope" would be tickled pink, or should I say illuminated as she has such a way with words and a heart to match As all "Swanee's" are gifted with the power to soar way above us, this poem is very fitting


  • Kari gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    sweet

    Awwwwwww what a sentimental piece this is. I love it.You've done a wonderful job.The best of luck to you in the contest!

    Kari


  • white stone
    October 17, 2006
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    This is blowing my mind. Watching this blossom is amazing.
    Poetry unfolding before me. I hope you guys meet and love each other forever. What a love story that would be in these jaded times. If you guys steal each other away from me I will consider myself happily thefted. Is that a word??... Heartfelt, crazy write mj.


  • JoyfulWriter
    October 17, 2006
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    This is absolutely beautiful in form and content...I so enjoyed reading this masterpiece! Smiles, Terry


  • 20CrystalTears09
    October 17, 2006
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    i liked this alot....great write....

    x*o*x*tomi*x*o*x


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    AWESOME JOB!!!!! ENJOYED IT!!!!!

    mjseattle



    You have done an excellent job exprssing your feelings and rendering this awesome tribute to a wonderful poetess such as our friend in pen, Night Hope

    She has a special way of writing that actually touches our hearts in many ways, and is a great person, for she cares when others are sick, or need help.

    Your words are certainly clear as well as the message it conveys..... Another great job of yours, please keep it up.....

    Be blessed with love and light always.....

    Be well.....


    Your friend always,
    AngelicMistress


  • masterblaster gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Hi, what a lovely poem for a lovely lady, psssssst I think it should be we're not were,lol, this is avery sweet write I am sure Night hope will love it, all the best Di


  • Griswold silver member
    October 17, 2006
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    Beautifully written and with great feeling throughout, i hope you are very happy with your Love and wish you nothing but the best...Scott

  • bebacksoon
    October 17, 2006
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    Lovely. There are some great relationships formed on AP and you seem to have found someone special. Good luck in the contest

  • soulfultia gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Enchanting

    I feel like I have a birds eye view of a love affair in bloom! You are capturing the essence in your write and letting us join you for through the flow of a gentle breeze. I am so excited for the two of you. Who cares what people say.... my motto in life is..."I would rather have exprienced a little wonderful... than to never have experienced it at all". So if this flourishes forever.... wonderful and if it doesn't... you will have been afforded this moment... feeling and loving. Hugs, ~Tia


  • Valesha
    October 17, 2006
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    good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    your poem is so undenialbly beautiful. it is so serene and calm.
    i feel like your love with that person goes beyond the limit and transcends into the skies. it is so passionate and romantic. you must deeply care for her.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Lovely piece of your heart inscibed here beautifully so I might add. Keep up the great works, they is power in the poetry!

    Thanks for sharing you!
    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~


  • SarahD
    October 17, 2006
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    This is so beautiful!! Really well described throughout!! And so heart warming!! You feel strongly I can tell - it's nice that you shared that with us! Blissful Princes


  • RealEyezRealize
    October 17, 2006
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    IM IN AWE

    B E A U T I F U L im lovin every moment of this is this the first time your saying I love you???if so poetry was the first way i told the love of my life i loved him....."i wrote this for you" is the name if u ever get a chance to read it I'd love and appriciate and be honored to get a comment from you....but no rush for love is in the air and may God bless you both on this new journey.....WRITE ON ROCK ON READ ON!!!!!!!!


  • Twilight Moon
    October 17, 2006
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    aww this is so sweet great poetry


  • BeautifulCalamity08
    October 17, 2006
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    Aww this is so sweet! Really this is adorable!!! It sounds like you have a great relationship through your poetry!!!

    Wonderful write!!!

    With Words Of Love and Hope,
    Lee-Ann

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