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Text Poem

Unanswered
texts. I wonder,
"are you still
there?" Your
silence makes
me think, "do
you even care?" I
sit. And wait. For
a message to
cross the void...

Author notes

Written as a text message one evening while waiting for my boyfriend to reply to me.
Written October 17th, 2006

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  • silica silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    What is a text… well yes I know but refuse to take part in such tomfoolery – would that be tmfoy¿? Bah humbug¡! Still a lot of emotion for so few lines.


  • EstherG
    July 23, 2007

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    Brief, simple, honest. Sometimes, poetry doesn't have to be all about metaphor or length. It's just a quiet reflection of a moment or feeling, however fleeting, and...well. Yes.

    Lovely.