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Katie the kitten

I have a little kitten
and her name is Katie Sue
she’s cute as she can be
with two eyes of deepest blue

She goes to sleep each morning
as the sun turns on it’s light
then scampers ‘round the house
every moment of the night

She plays with mommy’s ball of yarn
and teases neighbors' doggies
and if I’m not real careful
Katie eats up all my cookies

I love her so I’m sure you know
and she’s really very smart
she snuggles with me always
her purr just warms my heart







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Written October 17th, 2006

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  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 21, 2006
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    Greetings fallower, merry met!
    thank you for dropping by to read my scribbles and for leaving your kind thoughts behind, I truly appreciate it. And would like to send you a very warm welcome to AP!
    Many blessings Sandi


  • panegyric ink
    October 21, 2006
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    Very Good Imagery!

    Neither am I a fan of cats of any kind, But I gotta say, nice work here! Keep it up!

  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 20, 2006
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    Thank you FaeryPixieFey, I appreciate the read and your sweet thoughts. It's not fun when we can't have pets we want to have so badly with us
    Smooshes right back at ya Sandi


  • FaeryPixieFey
    October 19, 2006
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    Oh this was a delightful read Dear. Kudos to this sweet little kitten. I miss having cats so much but can't have them where I live . Your little poem brought back some of the pleasure I remembered though from having a cat. . Smoosh before I whoosh...FaeryPixieFey.


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 19, 2006
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    Thank you! This was a fun contest, our host is only 5 and an amazing little poet herself already!
    Sandi


  • Radio sirens4 Death
    October 18, 2006
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    Wow short and detailed.
    I'm not a fan of kittens bu this poem just knocks that out of my mind.
    Great job on writing something simple and making it good.

  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Hey there Titus! Thank you so much for popping in to read my scribbles today and for leaving your kind thoughts and encouragement behind, I truly appreciate it
    I hope you're doing well, today is wonderful I'm hearing from alot of my 'old' friends!

    Many blessings Sandi


  • Titus gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Somehow, kittens and poetry do go together,. We get the feel with both of these in this composition!! Nice work!

  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    hehehe babble all you want! Thank you so much for reading my scribbles my friend and leaving your wonderful thoughts behind, I truly appreciate you!

    love and blessings! Sandi

  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Well hiya Sis!! Thank you for your sweet thoughts, it's great to hear from you today, how are you??

    Love and s Sandi


  • Melissa Powell
    October 18, 2006
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    Awww sis, this was so sweet!! Very child like!
    I just loved it! xoxox

  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Paul, your kind thoughts left behind are enough applause for my heart, thank you!
    I hope life is treating you kind my friend, I'm errant on my messages and know I owe you several, thank you for your continued support of my scribbles, I appreciate you more than you could imagine!

    Many blessings Sandi


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    You are most welcome Kiarna Sandi

  • PoetryPuppy
    October 18, 2006
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    thank you for your cute poem kiarna.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 18, 2006
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    Excellent poem!

    LOL awww being a kitty lover myself Sani I love thias poem then again I love all animal poetry. This is a very beautifully penned oh so lovabule huggable cutsy poem! I enjoy your poem alot and I wish ya best of luck in the contest and may your kittne live to be nice and old and have a wonderful purrrrrrrrrrrrfect life Sincerely, Paul I'd applaud but I ran outta applauses *claps*


  • Sonja
    October 17, 2006
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    That was so cute Sandi. I like simple words and nice rhyme. I like cats, and I have kitty too. Her name is Shakira, little thief of hearts. She like to play a game like she is hiding herself. I must oretend that I do not see her. She is like a baby. Oh my, I am babbling... Wish you a lot of luck.
    ~Sonja~


  • Prince Charming
    October 17, 2006
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    How to bright up a day. I would give the cat some cookies! I aint a mean old man. Just like I share everything with Sophia. But I really dont think Sophia would like that little kitten, or it has to be as a toy. I have enjoyed it very much and that for a not really catman
    Kiss and hugs from the other desk

    Hermi


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Thank you elaine Every once in a while, we have to leave the serious behind and have some fun, hehehe

  • Sandi Alford gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    Hiya Margaret, yep you're correct! Thank you my sweet friend for your kind thoughts and support of my scribbles And pointing out my boo-boo's I appreciate you so much!


  • misselaineous
    October 17, 2006
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    cute


  • MargaretG
    October 17, 2006
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    This is very cute Sandi, and Katie Sue reminds me of a kitten we once had, who seemed like she was half monkey...
    There is a little problem with apostrophes, its (possessive) and neighbors' (plural). Or I could be wrong.

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