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Silence(Than Bauk)

I meditate
Fears abate a
Great state of mind.

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Than Bauk.Burmese Climbing Rhyme
Written October 17th, 2006

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  • Lislaine
    October 14, 2008
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    Niicee


  • insearchofsweetness
    January 7, 2008
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    I like that you took a different angle to the silence theme. Thank you for entering!


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    October 22, 2006
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    abate/great/state

    very nicely done...

    al


  • Tercil gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    Much can be brought to these immaculate lines. Fears are the concentration of mind. Nice work!!!


  • Cat gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    I love this- well said- well done.

    thank you so much for entering.

    m

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