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Expendable


    one day love means 'till you die you're pledged forevermore
    next day love has screamed goodbye and you go out the door
    no matter how much you cry, no matter how hard you try
    you'll prob'ly never know why you are expendable

    one day you are good as gold and love is tried and true
    next day you're just fat and old and love is tired of you
    you realize it was a lie when love does not bat an eye
    while coldly saying, "Goodbye! You are expendable."

    You can cry, let the tears come, my love
    you've just fallen off the calliope
    all the world is littered with broken hearts
    they were all expendable


    Someday you will overcome this tightness in your heart
    bide your time, just don't be dumb and blow it all apart
    you may as well keep it real no matter how bad you feel
    it's truly not a big deal you are expendable

    Now you've cried and you should smile, my love
    look around you everyone's all the same
    everyone has suffered a broken heart
    hearts are all expendable

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Live with your heart, love with your soul - souls don't break and they are not expendable
Written October 16th, 2006

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 5, 2007
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    Love with your soul...I have to allow this one to sink in.//lol

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    October 17, 2006
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    What Myra? Me, a harem? You do not know me very well! Ha ha ha. That is not possible. Not even in fantasies.... But thanks for the illustration... It is important that anyone who has been expended understand that is is only part of life, not the defining moment. The defining moment is when you decide the moment is more important than you.

  • myrataal silver member
    October 17, 2006
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    Your words sway, for they may!

    You are NOT NOT NOT expendable, no matter what the ENTIRE harem may say

    I loved this.

    It gives hope for all those not daring to love.



    Myra