The roses are gone.
The violets are dead.
Why can't I get your body out of my head?
You dressed in black.
Now ready to die.
Razorblade in hand readied for this horrid suicide.
No more regrets.
No more pain.
You were ready now to put the razor to your vein.
Now you'e gone.
Now you'e dead.
But your haunting eyes just wont leave my head.
The pain is great.
The sorrow is much.
My heart is broken and it hurts so much.
I still hear your voice.
I still feel your tears.
You seem to haunt me, and that's what I fear.
Sounds of your laughter.
Horrid cries of pain.
It doesn't matter they seem all the same.
I can't take it.
I just want to be dead.
Maybe then your forever haunting eyes will leave my head.
I hold your razor.
I sit on your grave.
I ready myself for the pain of your blood covered blade.
I want to die.
I don't want to live.
"Here lies the couple who both lost the will to live"
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Written October 16th, 2006
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Awww. :'[ This made me tear up!!!! It was so emotional!
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Sounds like something I would write.
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Sadness is Reality
Seems that we learn only thru hardship. Well, you have a step up on the rest of us. No one knows why people kill themselves, but the rest of us always miss them so, and they never realize it until they die and then they look back at their life and realize it then. Believe me, Matty is truly sorry for his pain, as is my uncle, who you know lost himself to suicide. I feel your pain and thank you for sharing...
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I know very well why Matthew killed himself. All he knew was suffering. His mother hated him and left him with his bastard father. His father beat him all the time. He was mocked at school because he was "pathetic".
There is guilt that still lingers in my heart. I should have stopped him that day three years ago. I should have begged him not to leave me sitting there all alone. I was the one who promised to protect him. I can only feel guilt now, but I try to be happy for the ones who love me.
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COOKIES
Yepp.
This poem is fantastic
I loved it.
The title got my attention to.
Good job ily!!
-kaytee -
i think it really gool keep it up keep writeing form your you feelings
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAY ITS NUMMY AND GOOD
my names natalie -
This was really really good..is the person narrating the poem you ar his gf? I am so sorry this happened to you...it hasn't to me, but my bf's best friend killed himself a few years back, and he held him in his arms while he died...it is such a horrible thing, and one of the reasons I will not end my life. Great write.
<333 Jess -
I got to read this poem first........I like it
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Thanxs for the hugs....wanna be my friend? I make a good friend. I give you cookies, hugs, and other such things! Asides all that....I'm very loyal, like a puppy dog! Woof-woof bark bark!
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this is so sad!!!! oh my gosh i'm sorry
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Loved it! Very chilling. It gave me goosebumps.
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* hug ** hug *
i love your poem....:rose :rose
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