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Melodic Lullaby

I find myself thinking about you more and more each day.
I think I’ll go crazy if this won’t go away
Every time I hear certain songs all the
Memories come crashing down inside my mind
Things change as you and I remain  
Life is just that way
Like the essence of black roses
Or the sound of a sweet melody  
It’s the way things are
Nothing more than that

Crows and robins sing the melodic lullaby
That sadly is my life
Based upon the tale of broken hearts and dead souls
Love had forgotten the life that is my own

Broken wings that can no longer fly
Eyes that are as black as the pits of hell
Hate consuming the lie of life
Yet hope shines brightest in dark places

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I just kind of up and wrote this.
Written October 16th, 2006

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  • She burns
    October 22, 2006
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    So sad and full of hope,Those memories you have,moments in life that will always stay,happiness and joy through that special someone....Hope that will happen again,but always it will be in your heart.....
    Just so powerful and amazing hunny,very creative and deep,I can strongly feel how you believe.....
    Hope you feel well there.....
    antonio