I just wanted to say thanks for caring about me now
I don't know what to do with out you,
I guess I never thought about it but no one knows
how fast someones life could end so quickly and
the night before your life ended you saved me that whole night
went by and no one called and then you did
I wont forget that you cared and when you told me I was worth it
I'm just sad that you won't ever call me back like you said you would but I know it wont be possible but
I will always remember what you've told me and that you will always be here for me
ALWAYS & FOREVER
Author notes
This is to a good friend of mine who died of a car accident on FRIDAY THE 13th
I will miss you forever..and I cant wait to see you up there.!!!
Written October 13th, 2006
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Brutally sad yet Heartfelt!
Well from experience I know how this goes. I lost my bestest best friend Kristy back on March 12th,2005 and it killed me. I found out she was killed by a drunk driver when she was picking up her best friend at the time. It is hard to cope with espically when they make such an impact upon ya it is brutally sad. Now as far as the poem goes it is brutally heartfelt and very sad that you lost your friend who you loved and cared about so much. Furthermore I do agree with some of the other poets in your poetic structire and punctuation but otherwise this is quite a readable poem. well written yet very sad. take care and always remember to cherish the memories you were both able to make while your friend was still alive down here. P.S. I also add that although you can't wait to see her again don't even think about ending your life in a suicide style manner. Its hard to go on I agree but you have people who do care about you. Any ways Take care.
Sincerely, Paul
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aww that really sad.. how are you coping with it?? well just keep your head up and remember they will always be with you in your heart if you allow them to.. always & forever is what that person said and i can tell that that person means it... so yea great poem.. and let me know if you need any advice on how to cope with problems like that because trust me i know all about close friends of mines and that includes my boyfriend whos life was ended..so just keep your head up ok.. im here if you need to talk anytime
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very nice and sad. i liked it. this write has all my respect! please keep it up
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well done on this peace of work i like it and you should not stop writting like this
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awww that is so beautiful, and so very sweeet.... it touched me deeply keep up the great work auntie
Frankie -
This poem is obviously heartfelt. You say so much here with so few words. There is something I can identify with though and that is the always aspect of it. When I am a friend I am always a friend unless or until the friend chooses to end the frienship. If this is based upon something that really did happen, them my take on it is that I agree with your always and forever at the end. The rest I appreciate on different levels and for different reasons. Great write.
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aww sis this is sad!
I'm sorry about your friend!
i love ya sis...you can talk to me when ever you need to! -
This is pretty nice, but I have to be real with you. The format is not good at all. Don't make the sentences run throughout the whole page, cut them short a little bit. don't change anything but that
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VERY BEAUTIFUL AND HEARtFELT
This was very touching Desarae. I am so sorry for your loss. God called your friend home for a reason. We may not understand why but in time you will see your friend again. Blessings to you and their family. I hope your home you are okay. I love ya, . Thank you so much for sharing. Take care , Love, Gramma.
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