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She Who Never Lurks in Doorways

Jezebel was begging for a verse, so
I wrote her one.
I wrote her one.
I wrote a song for Jezebel.
That damnable woman.
I gave to her a softly
spoken word.
I said a word.
I said a word.
I said a word to Jezebel.
And I think she's home
to stay.
She who never lurks in
doorways, and never sleeps
in bed,
but sleeps in doorways and
lurks in beds.
"It's best this way." She says.

I said a word to Jezebel.
She claims that things are
fine.
The knots in her hair, the
bruises on her knees speak
of how there have been
better times.
She who sleeps in doorways
and lurks in beds.
I wrote a song for Jezebel.
I wrote a song.
I wrote a song.
I wrote a song for Jezebel.
Who wishes she weren't there.

Author notes

Second song in the 'Jezebel' series.
Written October 15th, 2006

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  • Jessicorpse
    August 11, 2007
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    Remarkable work.

  • Crying Soul
    October 27, 2006
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    wow! Thats all I can say!


  • Dean
    October 17, 2006
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    I like how this was decidedly, completely, a song. It was a song in simplicity, a song in subtly. I loved it.