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Old Banyan Tree(Rondelet)

Old Banyan Tree
Reaching up high into the sky
Old Banyan Tree
A lovely sight for me to see
Your abstract roots delight my eye
God's work of art, I can't deny
Old Banyan Tree.

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Rondelet Form
Written October 15th, 2006

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  • Rhythm Child
    January 26
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    this read like something in my gcse exam anthology
    that takes me back
    thankyou for the entry


  • Frozentearz
    October 17, 2006
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    I loved that little line you put in
    God's work of art, I can't deny for truly all that we see is
    God's art.
    Thanks for sharing
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • FifthDove
    October 16, 2006
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    Bill this is a fabulous Rondelet And it is perfect in form as well. What a beautiful work of art. Thank you for the entry and best wishes in the contest Cindy