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Blame

You slit your wrists,
but you bleed inside;
You heart has been broken,
but you just cant cry;
you keep on going,
with the unbearable pain,
knowing who's the one to blame...

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Written October 15th, 2006

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  • baby cakes
    October 15, 2006
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    this is very good...like it a lot...i really like the ending...there could almost be a part two to this poem...very good write...
    -kris-