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Overwhelming Love (Part V - My Loss)

Drive this boat into the rocks baby
Good job I still have my tail.
I値l watch you grab this driftwood
Before I leave you to sail.

I値l swim through lonely oceans
Let the sea痴 call turn my heart cold
Maybe I値l never have to feel such love
Never find somebody to hold.

Maybe then I値l ESCAPE the pain
That life tries to put me through
Maybe, just maybe, I値l still be alive,
To see another true love find you.

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Written October 15th, 2006

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  • Kevo MF Last
    October 17, 2006
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    i enjoyed this one alot despite the subject matter. it was quick and to the point. flawless form and perfectly expressed emotions.