They ignore me all day.
And puzzle me so.
Why put me through this agony,
And make me feel so low?
I am too dependant,
and scared inside.
All of my emotions are silent.
and from everyone, they hide.
I'm masked by happiness,
and thats all they see.
I guess its better this way,
even though they still hurt me.
Yearning to die and never come back.
Too Friendless for anyone to care.
All I need is darkness to comfort my soul,
and remind me that life isnt fair.
Blades and Ropes teasing me to death,
the blood is so prettily falling,
as it stains my white pillow case.
Just stab my heart, and stop [s t a l l i n g]
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Author notes
Erm.
I dont like it that much.
I think i'll change the last line later. It doesnt sounds right.
Written October 15th, 2006
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This I felt!!!
Eh! Sounds like another 'Carrie' episode, there is much here of a death wish, and it is increasingly difficult to get out of this frame of mind, having read this, in otherwords, there will be many who read this who shall be prompted by these visuals. I have to applaud you for the fact that you have accquired a unique skill for feeling, Nicely written.
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5 if 4 is the highest
hopeless! being translated to imagery of words you can't arrange much better than what it appears here now.
coming to the point where you feel nobody is with you and the world seems didn't care.
now your wish might come true!
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I'm sorry. But where do you get off calling me hopeless?
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Nice write. I have felt that was before. But there is always hope. You not as invisable as you feel. I used to be the same way. I like the flow of your poem. If you ever need to talk you can talk to me( I know you don`t know me and thats probably weird. Well keep it up.
_Jill_
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woohoo
Hey, seems like you're thinking some dark stuff right now, wanted to just say that i hope that the storm clears soon. It's good though, don't think that it isn't okay- you rock hun
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i dont think i've ever read anything that said "life sucks" so perfectly as this. it's too easy to relate to. but who ever said that was a bad thing?
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this is amazing, i love it, i know how it feels. Life is ugh, just that way. this poem has strong emotions and is heartfelt and i can really relate to it, amazing write, keep it up!! btw i think the last line is perfect the way it is.
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