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Lovely Bound

The words you told me
Got to my mind.
BUT the sentence you said
Was only lied.
I never believed
In things you did.
BUT I only pulled through
Cause love was lit.
I was bound by love
involuntarily.
BUT they all said we matched
So precisely.
I had no idea
How to end it.
BUT sooner than later
I gave the hint,
And the 'love' we shared
Was finally bent.
BUT I could not break loose
Of the feeling
That all was worth it;
Part of maturing.



Author notes

This poem is about a former love of mine. I had hard times when this all took place, tho it is not shown in this poem.
but it gives a brief description of how it all was...
Written October 15th, 2006

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  • xxemokevinxx
    October 17, 2006
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    You used the same background as someone else in this contest, but the both of these poems have such different meanings even though it's the same format. I think it's beautiful how unique this is.
    -Kevin


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 15, 2006
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    Nicely spoken words. It lets us see inside your thinking, feeling and maturing. Wonderfully put.
    G A


  • Teddibly Abnormal
    October 15, 2006
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    I was bound by love
    involuntarily.

    awesome baby~~~~

    That all was worth it;
    Part of maturing.

    loveing it~