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Love poem

Brown hair, wonderful eyes
god you seem so perfect
from the freckles on your face
all the way to the tip of your toes
and not an inch I would change

I love how safe I feel when
you hold me
I love when you tell me that
I'm beautiful
and I never get tired of the
words "I love you"

maybe you don't realize how
much you've taught me
about love and about myself
you've given me a self-esteem
and taken away my heartache

no relationship is perfect
baby you must understand
that everyone argues
even through those times
remember how I truly feel

your name is forever engraved
in my secret heart of hearts

Author notes

I love my baby so much dont know where id be without him
Written October 15th, 2006

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  • Anulekha
    December 26, 2006

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    awwwww this is so sweet. it is so full of emotion and love. good write. i am glad that you found someone that you love and that loves you back. keep up the writing.

    ~*~Kristen~*~