Honeyed orange peel
the bittersweet taste of love
Opens the senses
Author notes
I'm not quite sure about the title. ^^; But I hope you enjoy this haiku. (:
Written October 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- ku me by cherche -d -ame.
1000 points, ended October 22, 2006, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for entering. I did enjoy this haiku indeed . I love the refreshing sense opening fragrance of an orange first being peeled (especially a blood orange. Best wishes in the contest,
reenie
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This is really good, I personally can't do a haiku to save my life, so I'm always in awe when people can. But I love this because it really does have that "opening of the senses" feel to it. Good work!
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