"It could be fatal" were the words that he uttered
In an instant my entire life and soul were gutted
A bleak future awaits with no promise of tomorrow
I never knew four words could produce such sorrow
I want so badly to make blood spill from my veins
Force this disease to release me from it's chains
Feeling so helpless cause there's nothing I can do
I wish with everything inside me that it is untrue
There is so much more I want to do with my life
I want to be a loving mother, a partner, a wife
I want to be there for my mother as she gets older
And hold my children close when it gets colder
I don't want to die
Author notes
I was recently diagnosed with a potentially serious disease, I am waiting for test results to see how bad it is.
Written October 15th, 2006
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WOW! That is something very scary to deal with. I see this was written quite a while ago. How did everything turn out?
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wow, that was amazing. you had my attention from the first line. i really hope everything turns out well.
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absolutely creative, wow u write really well here, bravo..bravo keep this up and u'll never know when this could be LIKED by millions of other readers IN AP..don't worry, people may not see this now but sooner or later they will..just try and socialize here, make some good friends..then you can each share your and their poetry..that way is fun....anyway good job, this write is appreciated!
"It could be fatal" were the words that he uttered
In an instant my entire life and soul were gutted
A bleak future awaits with no promise of tomorrow
I never knew four words could produce such sorrow
Nice write!
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