And you wonder why I find you questionable
Do you see now?
Because now I sit alone
Yet, another night; When I thought you might actually...
Hold me tight tonight
What a fool I must be to think I could possibly mean anything to you
You're all talk; mean and cruel
Cause you hurt me so
Is this revenge ( From: You To: Me )?
It feels this way to me
Is this really what you want us to be?
I thought you cared for me
Why did you lie?
I don't understand; Why?
I wish you would be honest with me
What the hell do you want from me?
If this is all your going to be about then let's just...
End it now; I don't want to be hurt... Not Again
It's my heart in jeopardy
Do you even care? ... What your doing to me?
I don't think so or you never would have made me feel...
So Damn Useless and Low
Author notes
" A broken dream scattered amongst the living"
Written August 26th, 2005
A contest entry
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I know how you feel. I felt this way after what Karl had done and with James too, because I just hated the fact I'd been lied to, or fooled by someone I thought truly loved me. I thought I was an idiot for believing their words.
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nice! i felt alot of anger here...which is what im looking for. you did an awesome job making your feelings evident. very vivid i must say. and even though some people have a molasses way of seeing things (NOTE: molasses is very friggin slow stuff) there was still a great amount of imagery here for me to see you this jackass you are talking about and what he was doing to you. very good poem. you stuck to the guidline so that is also good. good luck in the poem and thank you for joining.
Des2000
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